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Welcome back to another visit with the Weekend Writing Warriors, the blog hop for anyone who likes to write, where we share 8-10 sentences from a project and sometimes get creative with punctuation. 😉 I’m putting this up on Friday again, because I have another early Saturday where I probably won’t be home until late. This starts a few lines down from last week’s. Hawk is still talking to Noah. The first line is Hawk’s.

“You have to come with me.”

His face paled at that. “I can’t, Gavin. If he finds out I’ve contacted you, I’m dead, then how will I save you the next time?”

“I don’t need you to save me, little brother; I just need you alive.”

“Well, maybe I need the same, big brother. Have you thought of that?”

“Then, come with me. You can come back to the clubhouse. The Riders will protect you.”

Will Noah go with him? Will the Riders actually be able to protect him? What is going to happen next?

Comments on: "Weekend Writing Warriors: “Protect You”" (21)

  1. I love that they are both trying to protect their brother. I, personally, hope he goes with Hawk.

  2. Teresa Cypher said:

    Their dad is such rotten person! I hope he goes with him.

    No snippet for me this week.

  3. He makes a good point!

  4. Tricky situation. It might be good to have an ally inside their dad’s “camp”, but could also be very dangerous. Great tension, as always.

  5. nancygideon said:

    Ooooh, what a tense impasse. Both have good points. It’ll be interesting to see who caves in.

  6. I’m guessing if the solution was that simple – for Noah to go to the clubhouse with him and be protected – it would have already happened, which indicates many more plot complications ahead. I can’t wait to read more! Great snippet…

  7. I got a bit confused whether he was talking to Gavin or Noah, but the tension is palpable.

  8. I hope he goes along, but have a feeling that’s not an easy solution either.

  9. Families almost always create problems and here we have a doozy1

  10. Diane Burton said:

    What an impasse! Each trying to protect the other. I’m drawn into this story more each week. Good job.

  11. a lot of tension here – I have a feeling Noah’s not going to go with him though.

    (I forgot to register for this round of snippets but my post is up at https://hywelalyn.blogspot.com/2018/07/sunday-snippets-weekend-warriors_21.html )

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