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Welcome back to another visit with the Weekend Writing Warriors, the blog hop for anyone who likes to write. I left Hawk hanging last week, so I guess I should be nice and let everyone know whether he’s okay or not. I can actually be nice, sometimes, by the way. 😉

I groaned and rolled my head from one side to the other. It was hard to force my eyes open, but finally they cracked. I saw two faces above me, but they were blurry around the edges. I reached my hand up to my forehead and realized my helmet was gone.

”Take it slow,” a voice said over me. “That was quite a spill you took.”

Wraith. That was Wraith’s voice. At least my brain wasn’t so rattled I couldn’t recall that much. “Damon,” I gasped, nearly shooting right up, despite Wraith’s hands trying to pin me to the ground.

Where’s Damon? Did something happen to him as well? How badly hurt is Hawk?

Comments on: "WeWriWa: “Quite a Spill”" (10)

  1. At least the spill didn’t keep him down very long.

  2. Oh no! I hope they’re both ok, but at least he’s regained consciousness.

  3. We’re relieved about one person only to become frightened for another…great snippet!

  4. Going by Wraith’s tone, I’m guessing they’re not being shot at, but now I’m worried about Damon. Your version of nice isn’t very nice, Fallon. 😉

  5. I’m glad Hawk survived but I’m with the others, worried about Damon. Very effectively done! Great snippet…

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