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WeWriWa: “Out of Control”

Welcome back to another visit with the Weekend Writing Warriors, the blog hop for anyone who likes to write. I skipped the next line of the scene I’ve been sharing from in Hawk’s story. Icarus thought Hawk meant more than he did by the grandchildren comment.

I burst out laughing. “God, your face. No, Icarus, not that I know, not that they confide in me, but I’m pretty sure you’d be one of the first to know if Birdie got knocked up.”

There was a choking sound behind me, and I turned to look back to where Trace had stumbled to a halt, his face white. “Birdie’s pregnant? Why wouldn’t she tell me?”

I dropped my head back and hit it against the wall behind me. Devil was bent over, holding his side. “No one is pregnant; I don’t know a damn thing,” I said. “I made one little comment and it’s rolling out of control now.”

A little relief from the stress they’ve been under. Don’t worry, that will be coming back pretty soon.

Comments on: "WeWriWa: “Out of Control”" (11)

  1. Very amusing scene, SO true how these comments made in jest can riccochet and cause quite the sensation. Great snippet!

  2. Fun banter. They do need to lose control once in a while, don’t they?

  3. nancygideon said:

    LOL! I love a misunderstanding . . . and that one’s epic!

  4. I love how the misunderstanding is getting out of control. Great banter.

  5. Well that’s how rumours start, LOL! Great fun scene!

  6. I wonder what Birdie will think about this rumor.

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