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Welcome to another visit with the Weekend Writing Warriors, the blog hop for anyone who likes to write. This is going to be the last snippet I share from Staring at the Sun. Icarus and the other Riders have gone to face Henry and try to get him to stop harassing them. But, he’s not giving in that easily and has a surprise for Icarus. He’s just told them that his men are holding Cassie somewhere “safe”(nowhere around Henry is safe, but still). Icarus does not want to believe him.

“You really want to test that theory? If I turn up dead, my men know exactly who to go after, and you’ll end up in a cage again, exactly where you belong. So, either way, you won’t see her again, but if you walk away now, everything else will be forgotten between us.”

“Don’t believe him, Dad,” Trace said, drawing himself up beside Icarus. “I don’t think he’s lying about Mom, but he wouldn’t just let us ride away and forget about this.”

Icarus knew the truth of that, but he didn’t see what other option he had, and he was still hoping Henry was bluffing. He motioned for the other men to fall back, but didn’t turn around until he was right on the edge of the yard. When they were at the bikes, he ignored the clamor of voices, took out his phone, and dialed a number. “Chief,” he said, his voice trembling, “tell me he’s fucking with me.”

“I’m so sorry, Grady.”

Why is Chief sorry? Did they get Cassie? Will Icarus be able to save her if they did?

Also, I started posting Dance with the Devil to Wattpad on Friday. I have Chapter 1 up and plan to put up one chapter a week until it’s all there.

Comments on: "WeWriWa: “Test That Theory”" (21)

  1. What a dilemma. Great snippet.

  2. Between a rock and a hard place, Fallon! I hope Cassie is ok!

  3. Complicated situation but I’m sure you’ll get us all out of it safely! Enjoyed the snippet…

  4. Not much choice but to do as told. He’s not happy, is he?

  5. Great conflict. There seems to be quite the history between these groups. I’m interested to find out more.

  6. Kill the bastard. He’s playing games with the one they love! Well done!

    • ha, well Icarus doesn’t particularly want to spend another day in jail because of Henry. But, he’ll get his. Thanks!

  7. nancygideon said:

    What a tense scene! Those last lines slam it home.

  8. Eeek. What’s he going to do now?

  9. It seems his wife is indeed a captive.

  10. Diane Burton said:

    Tense scene with the heart going thud at the Chief’s words.

    I forgot to sign up, but I still posted my snippet. http://dianeburton.blogspot.com/

  11. What a dilema – very tense scene and a cliffhanger!

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