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WeWriWa: ‘In the Face’

Welcome back to another visit with the Weekend Writing Warriors, the blog hop for anyone who likes to write. Still sharing from Dance with the Devil(probably will be for a while). I skipped ahead a few paragraphs from last week, but Devil’s still in town, and he’s run into some trouble. Here’s 8 sentences:

I planned to walk around them, or even better turn and ride back out of town. But, that comment was more than I could take. It didn’t matter what order Icarus had given. Hell, it could have come straight from Chief. I wouldn’t have heeded it at that moment.

No one talked about Hawk like that. Not in my hearing.

I turned, took in his tag, [xx], then punched him in the face.

Welp. That’s not looking too good. Just what did the guy say to piss Devil off? And what’s going to happen now(well, what do you think would happen in a 3-1 fight?)

Comments on: "WeWriWa: ‘In the Face’" (16)

  1. Well, that would be one way to express disagreement. But 3 to 1? Oh well, bruises and bones heal… I guess.

    • Yeah, it’s not going to be too pretty. But, he did say he doesn’t always do the smart thing. Particularly when it comes to Hawk. 😉

  2. Love a character that goes for right over might! Can’t wait to see how this plays out, Fallon.

  3. Temper, temper. Now I want to know the before and after!

  4. Diane Burton said:

    Nothing like jumping into the fire. LOL Great excerpt. Can’t wait to see what happens next.

  5. Uh-uh, this is going to end in pain. XD

  6. ROTFL! Punch now, heal later! Great snippet.

  7. Karen Michelle Nutt said:

    Well that was one way to settle things.

  8. The lad has a temper, I see. Out of curiosity, what’s with the [xx]?

    • he certainly does. As for the [xx]: I put that in when I haven’t figured out a name for a character or some other detail.

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