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WeWriWa: ‘Face Him’

Welcome to another installment of Weekend Writing Warriors, the blog hop for everyone who loves to write. I’m still sharing from Come Back Down, my sequel to Into the Sun. Today’s 8 sentences pick up where last week’s left off.

   And, of course, I knew his, since he’d been named after his father. Neither of them went by that name, though.
“Phoebe Hartson,” the guy said.
Trace shifted now, as if he was going to get up. I put my hand on his thigh, though, silently asking him to stay where he was. Because I recognized the voice now. I didn’t even want to face him. It had been more than a year since I’d seen him.

Who is this guy? And why hasn’t she seen him in so long? I’ll have the next 8 sentences for you next week.


Comments on: "WeWriWa: ‘Face Him’" (10)

  1. Ah, a big mystery about who this chap is. “Read on to find out the answer!”

  2. Hmm, deliciously intriguing. I wonder who the mystery man is–especially since she wants Trace to stay with her. Nicely done, Fallon!

  3. You’ve got me wondering . . . Nice job, Fallon!

  4. Ooh, scary exes (whether that’s friends or enemies or otherwise) always make for trouble. I’m interested to see where this goes!

  5. Intriguing and I’m sure there will be lots of good plot ahead, with this new person who she hasn’t seen in a year. That could be good or bad! Great snippet…

  6. […] with next(and last) 8 sentences from the scene I’ve been sharing from. Here’s last week’s, if you want to catch […]

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